April 13th, 2022 
Strategic Management CW2
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Submission date: 24-Apr-2020 11:57PM (UTC+0100)
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1st Marker Dr. Vasilios Stouraitis
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Strategic Management CW2
GRADEMARK REPORT
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FINAL GRADE
70/100
GENERAL COMMENTS
Instructor
Style – 6/10
Clarification and justification of themes/issues to focus
Introduction – 4/5
Identification of scenario actions and issues – 11/15
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Theoretical analysis – 26/40
Pragmatic realism – 16/20
Conclusion – 2.5/5
Total – 70
A voice comment was left for this paper.
QM 1st Marker Dr. Vasilios Stouraitis
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Comment 1
good intro and good use of references – you could set up the argument more
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Comment 2
good discussion, you seem to use references only at the end and to be less expansive. Try to use more critical depth here.
Comment 3
references? good discussion but could be supplemented by references.
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Comment 4
again good referencing but why only at the end? the discussion is interesting but needs to be backed up
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QM very short paragraph, check structure
Comment 5
good use of references in the right location
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Comment 6
good conclusion, could use more recommendations but it is well written.
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